Sentences in Spanish are generally longer. You just have to open any book by Gabriel Garcia Marquez, Cortázar, Faciolinze or Sabato to notice how a sentence can be a page long. These sentences generally deal with complex feelings and events that impact the meaning of the book. As I continued reading
Pride and Prejudice, I noticed how Austen includes long, complex sentences in much the way our Latin writers do.
“It was generally evident whenever they met that he did admire her; and to her it was equally evident that Jane was yielding to the preference which she had begun to entertain for him from the first, and was in a way to be very much in love; but she considered with pleasure that it was not likely to be discovered by the world in general, since Jane united with great strength of feeling a composure of temper and a uniform cheerfulness of manner, which would guard her from suspicions of the impertinent.” (Austen, 14-15)
In this sentence a narrator exposes what Elizabeth thinks about the relationship between her sister and Mr. Bingley. All of the feelings that make this sentence up could be easily divided and turned into several sentences, but suddenly something would be lost, a line of thought. This 93-word sentence has a spirit of its own, it’s the perception of one of the sisters about the other, it shouldn’t be divided into any simpler forms as it reveals more of Elizabeth than of the subject it deals with.
Austen uses these long sentences to narrate the story and support what has been said by incorporating the opinion of one of the characters as seen in page 25:
“The sisters, on hearing this, repeated three or four times how much they were grieved, how shocking it was to have a bad cold, and how excessively they disliked being ill themselves; and then thought no more of the matter: and their indifference towards Jane when not immediately before them, restored Elizabeth to the enjoyment of all her original dislike” (Austen, 25).
Commas in this sentence provoke a sense of laughter when employed to separate the different elements in a list referring to the different reactions the sisters have towards being sick and Jane’s health state. In the same sentence we are also presented with Elizabeth’s reaction to the sister's comments and her final change in state of mind. Given the thematic of the book, Austen’s long sentences are perfect for the drawn out complexity of human thoughts and emotions.